


This is basically my offical draft. This will be the layout and colours used on my final piece, all I need to do now is edit my final photograph and fit the picture into my front cover! The red and black make it look alot more professional, rather then doing loads of different colours, making it look abit childish.







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* Do photo-shop again a bit better
* Place image more in the middle
* Cut down headings to shorter words
* 'free posters' above the mast head
* Put date and price on bar code
* write PETE across The image
* Underneath write 'how did he do it?'
* Above 'Pete number 1 again'
* Get rid of the top tops to stay fit
* Keep the red and black
* Change headline font
* two photographs near masthead
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